Ripples Novel Chapter 7--Revision 2
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(11-21-2013, 11:13 PM)tigrflye Wrote:  "So when a pimp and a gorilla grabbed the vampire, zip tied his arms behind his back, and carried him off, she wasn’t sure if it she was hallucinating." - typo. "it"

I like the new chapter.
Have you ever taken Vicodin? I have it for my back - I don't think I have ever drooled on myself. When one of my kids was 8, he broke his femur and took Vicodin. No drooling.
It isn't a big deal.. just didn't ring true for me. Maybe if she took more than one but then I think she would just get nauseous. Your story.. just my thoughts. Thanks for writing- I am enjoying it a lot.
Hey Jenn, I probably caught the "it" while you were reading it. Thanks, it's fixed. As to the Vicodin, I had a coworker who had this happen to her. She took two not one, and she drooled like mad, nearly dropped off at her desk. It's possible that's a one off, or I need to up the dosage. The drooling isn't important though, and I could cut it. It doesn't really matter if it happened if it's so foreign to everyone else's experience it may need to go. Thanks again.

Hey Chris, they'll be waiting for you. Thanks.

I upped the dosage for now. I may still make some cuts.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Ripples Novel Chapter 7--Revision 2 - by Todd - 11-21-2013, 10:09 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 7 - by ChristopherSea - 11-21-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 7 - by tigrflye - 11-21-2013, 11:13 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 7 - by Todd - 11-22-2013, 12:04 AM



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