Ripples Novel Chapter 7--Revision 2
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"So when a pimp and a gorilla grabbed the vampire, zip tied his arms behind his back, and carried him off, she wasn’t sure if it she was hallucinating." - typo. "it"

I like the new chapter.
Have you ever taken Vicodin? I have it for my back - I don't think I have ever drooled on myself. When one of my kids was 8, he broke his femur and took Vicodin. No drooling.
It isn't a big deal.. just didn't ring true for me. Maybe if she took more than one but then I think she would just get nauseous. Your story.. just my thoughts. Thanks for writing- I am enjoying it a lot.
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Ripples Novel Chapter 7--Revision 2 - by Todd - 11-21-2013, 10:09 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 7 - by ChristopherSea - 11-21-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 7 - by tigrflye - 11-21-2013, 11:13 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 7 - by Todd - 11-22-2013, 12:04 AM



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