Primal (new poem, Edit 3)

[jdvanwijk]

Hey Trueenigma,

Thanks for your criticism, I'm planning to do an edit somewhere in the next few days. The (admittedly odd) contraction was actually a result of wanting 'useless, but most treasured: my brother' on one line. This propably doesn't work as I intended. It was meant as an ironic wink, we can't stand our brothers/sisters sometimes, but they're very important nonetheless.

All best,
Jan