11-21-2013, 01:53 PM
Chazz,
I was mostly thinking about the line that I already pointed out, but I suppose it's not really an inversion, just an error in the syntax. Also the repeated line "what led him to this..."but then that's not really Rhyme driven, and looking back at it now, it's really not much worse than "as a child I missed what led him to this."
I've got the poem on paper. I will go through each line more closely, and post my notes tomorrow.
I was mostly thinking about the line that I already pointed out, but I suppose it's not really an inversion, just an error in the syntax. Also the repeated line "what led him to this..."but then that's not really Rhyme driven, and looking back at it now, it's really not much worse than "as a child I missed what led him to this."
I've got the poem on paper. I will go through each line more closely, and post my notes tomorrow.