11-21-2013, 04:58 AM
So this is my first response so please bear with me.
I really like this one.
Immediately while reading it, I saw the story playing out in my head. I saw you writing "I love you" on yourself, and the anticipation of the person seeing it made you both excited and nervous. Such a daring display makes you very vulnerable.
And the ending, (trying not to sound creepy) it's like I could see you in the shower, looking down sadly at the mark and all the emotion that single dot still held.
Love poems are awesome. Even if they are heartbreaking.
I really like this one.
Immediately while reading it, I saw the story playing out in my head. I saw you writing "I love you" on yourself, and the anticipation of the person seeing it made you both excited and nervous. Such a daring display makes you very vulnerable.
And the ending, (trying not to sound creepy) it's like I could see you in the shower, looking down sadly at the mark and all the emotion that single dot still held.
Love poems are awesome. Even if they are heartbreaking.