11-21-2013, 01:23 AM
Todd, I had dangerous contours, but thought it was too cliché, which probably is not a valid characterization within the noir genre, as it is painted as one big cliché (its very existence feeds on it). I chose precarious to achieve both the 'c' and 's' alliterations within that stanza. However, I see your reasoning to reconsider dangerous. Thanks for revisiting!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

