11-21-2013, 12:22 AM
Talk about an edit improving a poem.
I'll have to read this a few more times before I'm ready to comment more, but first impressions: I love what you did here, Chazz.
I'll have to read this a few more times before I'm ready to comment more, but first impressions: I love what you did here, Chazz.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson