Boardwalks (edit #4.1)

[ellajam]

wow, milo, thanks. Much different than hearing myself. I've been putting memories in and out, but i think it may be out after hearing yours, and Brendan was right on yap.

Sorry if it took you longer than it should have, but yay for me, thank you.
Good Morning.

edit: Hey, milo, you left out barks, , no problem, beautiful reading. Rethinking my edit.

Eh, I will redo it. I don't currently have a computer at my house and at work the 6kiwi site.is banned plus there is no mic, so I have to use my phone. The 6kiwi site doesn't work for my phone at all. Anyway, I will redo it.

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wow, milo, thanks. Much different than hearing myself. I've been putting memories in and out, but i think it may be out after hearing yours, and Brendan was right on yap.

Sorry if it took you longer than it should have, but yay for me, thank you.
Good Morning.

edit: Hey, milo, you left out barks, , no problem, beautiful reading. Rethinking my edit.

Eh, I will redo it. I don't currently have a computer at my house and at work the 6kiwi site.is banned plus there is no mic, so I have to use my phone. The 6kiwi site doesn't work for my phone at all. Anyway, I will redo it.

I don't see "barks" in the poem anywhere

Sorry, milo, my mistake, brain caught in an edit, I missed the soft sound of "pants" on the first 2 listens, but maybe I wasn't fully awake.

Your reading is, of course, perfect.
But I'm due to post an edit that will muck it all up.