11-19-2013, 11:10 PM
Todd, much obliged for the keen observations and suggestions. The past tense is certainly a consideration, many films/books of the genera are narrated by a gumshoe. First, I will edit the piece with your excellent pointers and then try a past tense version. Thank you so very much. You are a superb poet, a great mentor and a skilled editor my friend-in-pen!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

