11-19-2013, 01:16 PM
I'm going to give milo's method of recording and repeated listening a try, my original and the edit chris did, then maybe one addressing the bicycles. I'm hoping eventually one will sound right to me. It's worth a try.
No shredded memories, though.

No shredded memories, though.
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