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[addy]

I really loved this one Larry. Full of imagery, and I really got your introspection this time around. You effectively used nature as a metaphor for the human experience. Reminded me of Dickinson poem: "After a great pain, a formal feeling comes."

Very nice

tempered dawn skating
on ocean’s sapphire surface
gliding through stillness acquired to me the image "skating" and "gliding" is pretty much the same, so I'd take out one and replace it with something else
from a spring hurricane’s carcass I like this image. So much so that maybe you should use a more expressive verb than "acquired", something that could color the story of the 'remains of a hurricane's carcass'.

no I cannot call this quietness
but wounded silence stretching
across the broken docks to
cold dust dunes of once whole boulders to me dust means dry, so it doesn't fit
guarding the shore’s circumference like this line

morning to me is no more
than the night it follows

i can still smell rain
amidst the sea breeze nice ending