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Hunter S. Thompson
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11-17-2013, 11:35 PM
I am a novice myself, so I always fear being to opinionated as far as critiquing goes. But, I do feel like, as a few others said, the rhythm, if you're going to rhyme, should probably be something regular. And the last line introduces that he is a genius, then ends. Maybe you could expand on this? Or maybe it is meant to be provocative, which I would totally get.
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