We may have been in love that time

We may have been in love that time

justcloudy Offline

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11-17-2013, 10:08 AM

Thanks Todd. I took your suggestions, helpful as always.

I added in a line (L4) because I felt the transition from light to darker was a bit abrupt. Hope the change helped.

-justcloudy

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Messages In This Thread

We may have been in love that time - by justcloudy - 11-16-2013, 09:36 AM

RE: Remember? - by cidermaid - 11-16-2013, 06:48 PM

RE: Remember? - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 04:09 AM

RE: Remember? - by lucentwavering - 11-17-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: Remember? - by tectak - 11-17-2013, 06:31 AM

RE: Remember? - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 09:18 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by Todd - 11-17-2013, 09:37 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by Todd - 11-17-2013, 10:49 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by tectak - 11-17-2013, 06:19 PM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 08:33 PM

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