We may have been in love that time

We may have been in love that time

justcloudy Offline

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11-17-2013, 09:18 AM

tectak and lucent thank you both so much for your comments.

Posting a revision now. I think it's an improvement, but I'm honestly not sure if it's clearer now or if I muddled things up more.

-justcloudy

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Messages In This Thread

We may have been in love that time - by justcloudy - 11-16-2013, 09:36 AM

RE: Remember? - by cidermaid - 11-16-2013, 06:48 PM

RE: Remember? - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 04:09 AM

RE: Remember? - by lucentwavering - 11-17-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: Remember? - by tectak - 11-17-2013, 06:31 AM

RE: Remember? - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 09:18 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by Todd - 11-17-2013, 09:37 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by Todd - 11-17-2013, 10:49 AM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by tectak - 11-17-2013, 06:19 PM

RE: We may have been in love that time - by justcloudy - 11-17-2013, 08:33 PM

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