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Love Is A Maze
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11-16-2013, 11:22 AM
I agree with all the above, plus I'd love some correct punctuation. L2 has 2 dots at the end, and I don't know if that is a typo of a period or supposed to be an ellipsis, but if it is the latter, you need three dots. I think it would help greatly to push all of this into the present tense instead of switching.
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Love Is A Maze - by Anonymous - 11-08-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: Love Is A Maze - by rowens - 11-08-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: Love Is A Maze - by Nick - 11-09-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: Love Is A Maze - by Graystar - 11-10-2013, 07:21 PM
RE: Love Is A Maze - by heslopian - 11-12-2013, 02:31 PM
RE: Love Is A Maze - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 03:41 PM
RE: Love Is A Maze - by bena - 11-16-2013, 11:22 AM
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