Accompany, revision of Walk With Me

[beaufort]

I think you have done a good job with this editing. The meaning of the poem is clearer to me now, and the personification of pain is also clear. I am still having a bit of a problem with "Hell drags us about" - when I read it out loud it seems to interrupt the rest of the phrases, but that may just be how I read. I like the "resentful toes"!! I think many will identify with that!