Thank you Chris. I'll edit the original poem in the thread I have here but won't bump it. While it's possible that my narrator is untrustworthy he should get his science right. I'm glad to have you here to help me with that.
Thanks,
Todd
Oh and the Merryman hotel is purely made up on my part. Since I now know there is a chain. I may check them out, reword slightly, and may even rerecord. Thanks.
Thanks,
Todd
Oh and the Merryman hotel is purely made up on my part. Since I now know there is a chain. I may check them out, reword slightly, and may even rerecord. Thanks.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

