11-13-2013, 11:29 PM
(11-13-2013, 08:13 PM)beaufort Wrote: I was aiming at the garden of Eden reference and the concept of original sin and that guilt seems to hang around everyone even though it is most often totally irrational.Yah, I figured it was eden which is why I don't like "that", it is usually referred to as the garden.
Thanks to all of you for taking time to critique. I will take it all in and revisit the poem.

