Guilt
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(11-13-2013, 08:13 PM)beaufort Wrote:  I was aiming at the garden of Eden reference and the concept of original sin and that guilt seems to hang around everyone even though it is most often totally irrational.

Thanks to all of you for taking time to critique. I will take it all in and revisit the poem.
Yah, I figured it was eden which is why I don't like "that", it is usually referred to as the garden.
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Guilt - by beaufort - 11-13-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Guilt - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 11:14 AM
RE: Guilt - by beaufort - 11-13-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Guilt - by milo - 11-13-2013, 12:26 PM
RE: Guilt - by cidermaid - 11-13-2013, 05:40 PM
RE: Guilt - by beaufort - 11-13-2013, 08:13 PM
RE: Guilt - by milo - 11-13-2013, 11:29 PM
RE: Guilt - by Maya - 11-18-2013, 12:09 PM
RE: Guilt - by beaufort - 11-18-2013, 08:25 PM
RE: Guilt - by Polar Bear - 11-19-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: Guilt - by Mattisimo - 11-27-2013, 06:22 AM



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