11-12-2013, 08:48 PM
Thank you Tec, I posted it here intentionally. The Poetry may be novice, but my skin for critique suits serious. Cheers
Thanks for the comment Todd.
I will apply all of this critique
Thanks for the comment Todd.
I will apply all of this critique
You'll find out who I am within the imagery, it pleads 'fuck the metaphors and scream'

