Wet Knife (Revision)

Wet Knife (Revision)

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11-12-2013, 08:08 PM

Thanks Euan, I'll think about the ending. What word cuts did you have in mind? I'll consider them.

I'm mostly a minimalist so I could see possibly cutting the with, and the through your fingertips (though I currently like them there of course).

Everything, as always, is on the table.

Appreciate the comments,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Wet Knife (Revision) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 06:23 AM

RE: Wet Knife - by heslopian - 11-12-2013, 01:51 PM

RE: Wet Knife - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 07:57 PM

RE: Wet Knife - by Euan - 11-12-2013, 07:59 PM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 08:08 PM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Euan - 11-12-2013, 08:22 PM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 08:26 PM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Nick - 11-13-2013, 05:00 AM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 11-13-2013, 05:40 AM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 08:13 AM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Stephanie - 11-13-2013, 11:02 PM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Todd - 11-14-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: Wet Knife (Revision) - by Stephanie - 11-14-2013, 05:26 PM

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