Short Story: Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 4

[milo]

Hi, milo, I enjoyed this. I especially loved how your brought life into Aelphaba, I could hear her.

I had no problem with the mouse/horse bit, I liked it, I was even waiting for him to check his pocket when he went from falcon to man, feeling it squiggle in there.

Thanks again for posting these.
Typo:That should buy us enough times (time) to make our decision at the spring games tournament

Hey Ella! I am glad you read and enjoyed this. I will correct the typo. I actually had that same thought of merlin checking his pocket and now that you mentioned it I will shamelessly add that in as well. I think it makes a good reminder for the reader, especially if merlin ends up using it again . . .