11-12-2013, 04:32 AM
Hi, milo, I enjoyed this. I especially loved how your brought life into Aelphaba, I could hear her.
I had no problem with the mouse/horse bit, I liked it, I was even waiting for him to check his pocket when he went from falcon to man, feeling it squiggle in there.
Thanks again for posting these.
Typo:That should buy us enough times (time) to make our decision at the spring games tournament
I had no problem with the mouse/horse bit, I liked it, I was even waiting for him to check his pocket when he went from falcon to man, feeling it squiggle in there.
Thanks again for posting these.
Typo:That should buy us enough times (time) to make our decision at the spring games tournament
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