For the Queens of Zimbabwe
#5
Hey there thanks for the feedback.
As i said i knew there were flaws here. Thats why i wanted to workshop this poem. This is a first pass, and i will take the critiques with me into the second draft.
Thanks
Chazz
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For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by Charlesjoseph - 11-10-2013, 09:45 PM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by milo - 11-10-2013, 10:24 PM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by justcloudy - 11-11-2013, 08:24 AM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by Stephanie - 11-11-2013, 07:46 PM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by Charlesjoseph - 11-11-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by Todd - 11-11-2013, 10:32 PM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by Charlesjoseph - 11-11-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: For the Queens of Zimbabwe - by heslopian - 11-12-2013, 02:23 PM



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