11-11-2013, 09:49 PM
Hey there thanks for the feedback.
As i said i knew there were flaws here. Thats why i wanted to workshop this poem. This is a first pass, and i will take the critiques with me into the second draft.
Thanks
Chazz
As i said i knew there were flaws here. Thats why i wanted to workshop this poem. This is a first pass, and i will take the critiques with me into the second draft.
Thanks
Chazz

