Love Is A Maze

[Graystar]

Love Is A Maze

Love is a maze of truth
With all the dead ends..
We grew
All the hardships,
Pushing through
And in the end what I found This is what you say at the end, IMHO.
Was you.

First you ripped my heart off my sleeve Could you start with this?
Even then we loved,
Anonymously.
We rushed, I tripped and fell. Really like this.
Growing distant, Now insert the hardships....
But on the same trail
In this maze searching for the truth,
But in the end Weak line perhaps To my delight
What I found
Was you.


This is definitely worth a rewrite, some more maze like metaphors and better punctuation would enhance this greatly. Also revise all the capitals at the beginning of lines. This was a mistake I used to make too.

Thanks for reading! I appreciate all criticism to hopefully get better!