Jane (a sonnet)

Jane (a sonnet)

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11-10-2013, 11:45 AM

^ will do.
Just re-wrote the "controversial" line. Can't wait to see her reaction! Smile

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Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-09-2013, 07:52 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ellajam - 11-09-2013, 10:27 PM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 01:03 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by milo - 11-10-2013, 01:12 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ellajam - 11-10-2013, 01:14 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 01:13 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 09:43 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by lainey - 11-10-2013, 11:41 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 08:30 PM

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