Jane (a sonnet)
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(11-10-2013, 01:03 AM)ThePinsir Wrote:  Yeah...the "love" thing was a bit much. But it's the only word I could think of that (kinda) rhymes at the time. I'll work on it this afternoon.

Also, you guys wouldn't say that, for example, "move" and "love" rhyme, even though they have the same ending??
Here we say moov and luv. Accents change things, do they rhyme where you live?.
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Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-09-2013, 07:52 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ellajam - 11-09-2013, 10:27 PM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by SirBrendan - 11-09-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 01:03 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by milo - 11-10-2013, 01:12 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ellajam - 11-10-2013, 01:14 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 01:13 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by lainey - 11-10-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 11:45 AM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by newsclippings - 11-10-2013, 03:35 PM
RE: Jane (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 11-10-2013, 08:30 PM



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