Myosotis

[Charlesjoseph]

Child,
When I saw you
I was afraid
To touch you
My hands
Unworthy
Of your innocence
Fragile...Infant...Buddha!!
Your atomic smile The atomic smile could be used to light up the world not silence it- hey, how about enlighten the world as long as we got Buddha here- the silence the world aspect brings an atomic explosion into the interpretation and I don't think that is your intent with the piece.
Enough to silence the world
Now,
After all the flowers
I remain
Years will pass
The wreaths and sprays
All discarded
In my thoughts
Always
One
Glorious
Forget-me-not_

Nah keith, an atomic explosion was intended but thanks for the input
chazz

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Hey milo,
It seems that my response to your original question has offended you in some way or at least that's how it comes across. I appreciate what you have to say and your opinion is duly noted. Perhaps in hindsight, I shouldn't have posted this one because of the subject matter that you obviously overlooked. That said, how would you format this....
Chazz