Jane (a sonnet)

[ThePinsir]

Gonna ask "her" out when I pick her up from the airport this Sunday. With a sonnet. Women love sonnets
Line 6 is choppy as hell. I need help
Catch the REO Speedwagon reference.
Catch the Disney references. Women love Disney
Her middle name is Jane.

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Version 2.0

No longer can I wait to bust a move,
to take a chance, a leap of faith, and see
if maybe, just maybe, our destinies
are tied, if Fate would smile and approve.
What started out as friendship can improve,
become a union we could not forsee.
So, milady, I think that you and me
should date and fall into an awesome groove.
So if you're feeling brave it's time to fly
upon a magic carpet all our own,
our spirits such that nothing can contain.
You'll never know if you're afraid to try
and neither of us likes to be alone--
what say you, then? This Tarzan needs his Jane!

Original:

No longer can I wait to bust a move,
to take a chance, a leap of faith, and see
if maybe, just maybe, our destinies
are tied, if Fate would smile and approve.
What started out as friendship can improve
into something too awesome to forsee.
So, milady, I think that you and me
should date (and maybe one day fall in love).
So if you're feeling brave it's time to fly
upon a magic carpet all our own,
our spirits such that nothing can contain.
You'll never know if you're afraid to try
and neither of us likes to be alone--
what say you, then? This Tarzan needs his Jane!