Myosotis
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(11-08-2013, 01:05 PM)Charlesjoseph Wrote:  Child,
When I saw you
I was afraid
To touch you
My hands
Unworthy
Of your innocence
Fragile...Infant...Buddha!!
Your atomic smile The atomic smile could be used to light up the world not silence it- hey, how about enlighten the world as long as we got Buddha here- the silence the world aspect brings an atomic explosion into the interpretation and I don't think that is your intent with the piece.
Enough to silence the world
Now,
After all the flowers
I remain
Years will pass
The wreaths and sprays
All discarded
In my thoughts
Always
One
Glorious
Forget-me-not_
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Messages In This Thread
Myosotis - by Charlesjoseph - 11-08-2013, 01:05 PM
RE: Myosotis - by milo - 11-08-2013, 01:23 PM
RE: Myosotis - by Charlesjoseph - 11-08-2013, 01:48 PM
RE: Myosotis - by milo - 11-09-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: Myosotis - by Nick - 11-09-2013, 07:09 AM
RE: Myosotis - by Charlesjoseph - 11-09-2013, 12:15 PM
RE: Myosotis - by milo - 11-09-2013, 10:30 PM
RE: Myosotis - by Charlesjoseph - 11-10-2013, 12:58 AM
RE: Myosotis - by Todd - 11-09-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: Myosotis - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 01:11 AM



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