Love Is A Maze

[Nick]

Love Is A Maze

Love is a maze of truth
With all the dead ends..
We grew
All the hardships,
Pushing through
And in the end what I found
Was you.

First you bit the heart off my sleeve.
And still we loved,
unreservedly.
We rushed along
I tripped and fell
Growing distant,
But on the same trail
In this maze searching for the truth,
and in the end
what I found
is you.


Thanks for reading! I appreciate all criticism to hopefully get better!

You can see some of my thoughts in an alteration of your original. The thing is your flow direction with this piece seems multi directional and a crafted thrust for a stanza eludes me.

So keep at it.