Weight

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rowens
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11-09-2013, 01:13 AM

It's a hard thing to deal with; it does feel weighty, so the title makes sense. It's packed with stuff. The first stanza almost comes off as a Peter Piper kind of thing. And you keep the wording very tight but to the point of sounding harshly rigid.

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Weight - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 08:31 PM

RE: Weight - by rowens - 11-09-2013, 01:13 AM

RE: Weight - by ellajam - 11-09-2013, 01:33 AM

RE: Weight - by justcloudy - 11-09-2013, 06:21 AM

RE: Weight - by rowens - 11-09-2013, 06:32 AM

RE: Weight - by justcloudy - 11-09-2013, 06:49 AM

RE: Weight - by ellajam - 11-09-2013, 09:13 PM

RE: Weight - by Todd - 11-09-2013, 09:21 PM

RE: Weight - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 03:07 AM

RE: Weight - by rowens - 11-10-2013, 04:36 AM

RE: Weight - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 05:08 AM

RE: Weight - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 05:41 AM

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