Yellownape
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(11-08-2013, 09:54 PM)jdeirmend Wrote:  Ella, thanks for the compliments and feedback, I really do appreciate it. Smile When I post a longer piece, I get afraid that people won't even finish it, so thanks for making it to the end.

My punctuation is a mess, I know. Do you mean to say that I failed to capitalize after every period?

I will go through and try to edit for punctuation again.

- James
Maybe I just see more sentence breaks than you do. I'm no punctuation expert, maybe one will come by, if not I'll give it a go.Smile
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Yellownape - by jdeirmend - 11-08-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Yellownape - by ellajam - 11-08-2013, 09:44 PM
RE: Yellownape - by jdeirmend - 11-08-2013, 09:54 PM
RE: Yellownape - by ellajam - 11-08-2013, 10:08 PM
RE: Yellownape - by ChristopherSea - 11-08-2013, 10:14 PM
RE: Yellownape - by jdeirmend - 11-08-2013, 10:50 PM
RE: Yellownape - by SirBrendan - 11-09-2013, 10:21 PM
RE: Yellownape - by jdeirmend - 11-10-2013, 12:19 AM



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