Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5)

Hello There, Guest! Register

WILL ALL MEMBERS PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM IN ANY OF THE MAIN WORKSHOPS.

Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5)

ellajam Offline

Offline

Consensually Agreeable

Posts: 1,325
Threads: 82
Joined: Sep 2013

#28

11-08-2013, 09:20 PM

Hi, Todd, have you considered changing the psychiatric notes into more of the form of Alice's part? It could make a nice comparison between the validity of each if they sang the same way.

Just a thought. Smile

Smile

billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips

Reply

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 02:35 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by lizzyrose12 - 10-18-2010, 03:28 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by tectak - 05-06-2015, 05:21 PM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 04:01 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by billy - 10-18-2010, 09:57 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 10:11 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by billy - 10-18-2010, 10:18 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 10:21 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by billy - 10-19-2010, 11:30 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by Todd - 06-30-2011, 05:45 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion (Revision) - by addy - 06-30-2011, 08:21 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion (Revision) - by Todd - 07-09-2011, 12:59 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion (Revision) - by Leanne - 06-30-2011, 09:11 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion (Revision) - by billy - 06-30-2011, 05:45 PM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion (Revision) - by critical mass - 06-30-2011, 10:16 PM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-22-2013, 10:51 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by ChristopherSea - 10-22-2013, 09:56 PM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-22-2013, 10:05 PM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by cidermaid - 10-23-2013, 03:05 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-23-2013, 03:16 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by bena - 10-23-2013, 04:13 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by ChristopherSea - 10-23-2013, 04:20 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 05:12 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by jdeirmend - 10-27-2013, 11:35 AM

RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Looking Glass Delusion (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 11:44 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by milo - 11-08-2013, 08:56 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by Todd - 11-08-2013, 09:13 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by cidermaid - 11-08-2013, 04:08 PM

RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by ellajam - 11-08-2013, 09:20 PM

RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by Todd - 11-08-2013, 09:25 PM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 4) - by Todd - 11-09-2013, 08:21 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Todd - 05-01-2015, 11:42 PM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Magpie - 05-11-2015, 12:09 PM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Anne - 05-02-2015, 03:52 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Todd - 05-02-2015, 05:25 AM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Todd - 05-06-2015, 11:19 PM

RE: Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5) - by Todd - 05-11-2015, 01:41 PM

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)