11-08-2013, 08:28 PM
I know next to nothing about Haikus, but this seems a little wordy to me. If you get rid of "it's" and "that" it would be stronger. Maybe the "and" in the last line too?
That being said, I love the thought, the image. It's the truth too.
That being said, I love the thought, the image. It's the truth too.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.