11-08-2013, 08:24 PM
The edit is an improvement, nicely done. Title is better too.
"Life was different" --> when? Before the apocalypse? At its beginning? It's unclear, and that's the only bit that bothers me.
Thumbs up.
-justcloudy
"Life was different" --> when? Before the apocalypse? At its beginning? It's unclear, and that's the only bit that bothers me.
Thumbs up.
-justcloudy
_______________________________________
The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.