Myosotis

[Charlesjoseph]

I am curious what criteria you are using for line breaks here.

Hey Milo,
I am not an educated poet. I don't know why i broke the lines the way i did. But, i do read quite a bit and i'm sure most of the poetry that i write is in a form that i've seen somewhere before. I don't know, it feels right to me this way, because when i read it aloud it slows down the pace of the poem. Call it artistic license.
Cheers,
Chazz