11-08-2013, 01:05 PM
Myosotis (revision 1)
Child, when I saw you
I was afraid to touch you.
My hands unworthy of your innocence.
Fragile...Infant... Buddha!
Your atomic smile enough to silence the world.
Now, after all the flowers I remain.
The wreaths and sprays all discarded
In my thoughts one glorious forget-me-not.
Ok guys,
This is what i came up with. I'm having a little trouble with punctuation though. Thanks for the feedback.
Chazz
Child, when I saw you
I was afraid to touch you.
My hands unworthy of your innocence.
Fragile...Infant... Buddha!
Your atomic smile enough to silence the world.
Now, after all the flowers I remain.
The wreaths and sprays all discarded
In my thoughts one glorious forget-me-not.
Ok guys,
This is what i came up with. I'm having a little trouble with punctuation though. Thanks for the feedback.
Chazz