hide and seek

[milo]

This is pretty good. The break between S4 and five is a bit of a hang up, but I think it works for the most part. The hide and seek image, counting with Mississippi, is incredibly powerful.

thanks for the comments. Yes, I had originally handled all the transition with white space. I am not sure you remember but I hate gimmicks like white space (until I do it of course) so i hated the result and removed the white space. I have considered a new solution to make the transition less painful.

And just who, or what story, were you planning on putting in this "white space", as an allusion?

doesn't all white space allude to Judas Iscariot through the virgin Mary?