11-08-2013, 08:52 AM
You mean the line or the general idea is too obvious? I don't like the line.
Sometimes I write these poems that have a certain flow, and they irritate me because I go over and over them and they get stuck in my head like an annoying song. I try not to read them anymore for a while.
Sometimes I write these poems that have a certain flow, and they irritate me because I go over and over them and they get stuck in my head like an annoying song. I try not to read them anymore for a while.