11-07-2013, 10:35 PM
What I like: the topic; the original wording; the length.
What I don't like: these are little boys. that's not how they talk. personal preference really; "unbeknownst" is awkward
The likes outweigh the dislikes, but I feel it's too distant. Kinda wispy. Needs more punch.
-justcloudy
What I don't like: these are little boys. that's not how they talk. personal preference really; "unbeknownst" is awkward
The likes outweigh the dislikes, but I feel it's too distant. Kinda wispy. Needs more punch.
-justcloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.