Tiny Green Dots

[tectak]

Although
Certainly
The tiny green dots fill the meadow,
As deer and the squirrels,
Crowd around the little hole.
I stare confused.

And I come a little closer.
Expecting them to be drinking the cool water.
I stare awe struck,
With a small little grin on my face.
Granted that
Surely

To explain
To enumerate
I come a little closer,
And they all run away.
Some how,
Scared of my intentions.



'Sorry', I whisper,
Ruining the gentle, peaceful moment.
Suddenly the green dots are like wisps,
And I realize the meadow is gone.
As a result
Accordingly

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I myself though it was very sloppy. I tried to use transitional words, but I think I failed. I also think I failed on making a dark, but happy poem.

If you think it failed then rewrite it until you think it succeeds otherwise the crits will just agree with you. Yes...it failed....happy now?
Far too many small, little, tiny things.
Best,
tectak