11-07-2013, 08:01 AM
(11-06-2013, 11:50 PM)ThePinsir Wrote: this is the best poem I've read since I've been here. that last line REALLY took me by surpriseThanks for the comments and the read.
(11-06-2013, 10:48 PM)ellajam Wrote: Ooohhh, first read but I really like this; it brought a lot of images into my head that kept changing as I read. Packs a wallop.Thank you, as Todd mentioned, sometimes it is unexpected.


