11-06-2013, 06:56 AM
TrueE: I appreciate the comments and the encouragement. It helps me to keep on with this one.
Milo: I see what you did. I think I like it except I wonder if I should just move to tetrameter and be done with it. The trimeter feels choppy and less song-like to me. I also can see a few lines I may want to shift a bit if I go the tetrameter route.
Thank you both, I have more to consider.
Best,
Todd
Milo: I see what you did. I think I like it except I wonder if I should just move to tetrameter and be done with it. The trimeter feels choppy and less song-like to me. I also can see a few lines I may want to shift a bit if I go the tetrameter route.
Thank you both, I have more to consider.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson