Some Poets

[Nick]

I did enjoy the imagery that you established here. For some reason though, I was getting really caught up on the flow if it. It was really choppy and I wasn't sure the rhythm (if there was supposed to be) was quite right. I would have liked to see some punctuation, but then again I'm really no expert.

Yeah, choppy. Kinda like the clip clop of high heels as the move along the sidewalk.
I get the punctuation need. It sometimes draws from the immediacy of a piece. Thus this one is sans.

And no one starts out as an expert. Really.

Thanks for your comments.