11-05-2013, 08:53 AM
Smoke blows complaints
in sheltered accommodation,
drinks to remember
a perilous occupation.
Man i've read this like twenty times i like it alot but i get lost here. Not sure what bothers me about it. maybe because it seems more literal than visual. The rest is well done though.
cheers
in sheltered accommodation,
drinks to remember
a perilous occupation.
Man i've read this like twenty times i like it alot but i get lost here. Not sure what bothers me about it. maybe because it seems more literal than visual. The rest is well done though.
cheers