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Some Poets
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11-05-2013, 08:48 AM
I did enjoy the imagery that you established here. For some reason though, I was getting really caught up on the flow if it. It was really choppy and I wasn't sure the rhythm (if there was supposed to be) was quite right. I would have liked to see some punctuation, but then again I'm really no expert.
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Some Poets - by Nick - 10-17-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Some Poets - by billy - 10-17-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: Some Poets - by Nick - 10-22-2013, 04:00 AM
RE: Some Poets - by Todd - 10-18-2013, 10:53 AM
RE: Some Poets - by ThePinsir - 10-24-2013, 04:08 AM
RE: Some Poets - by Nick - 10-26-2013, 02:29 AM
RE: Some Poets - by allykat727 - 10-26-2013, 06:07 AM
RE: Some Poets - by Nick - 10-29-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Some Poets - by Two_muffins - 11-05-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: Some Poets - by Nick - 11-06-2013, 02:51 AM
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