11-05-2013, 12:18 AM
You have to correct your punctuation and use of caps.
The Corn Maze
The trees are on fire again;
red, green, gold and grown.
Soon they will be grey as ash.
Another summer, another autumn delete comma
and soon delete comma the snow will fall.
In the fields delete comma the tractor wheels delete comma
kick up harvest moon dust,
While children select pumpkins delete comma
to decorate windows and porches.
Another summer, another autumn delete comma
and soon everything green will die.
As we walk this maze of dead stalks,
the New Year beckons delete comma
to spring the strongest seeds.
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The Corn Maze
The trees are on fire again;
red, green, gold and grown.
Soon they will be grey as ash.
Another summer, another autumn delete comma
and soon delete comma the snow will fall.
In the fields delete comma the tractor wheels delete comma
kick up harvest moon dust,
While children select pumpkins delete comma
to decorate windows and porches.
Another summer, another autumn delete comma
and soon everything green will die.
As we walk this maze of dead stalks,
the New Year beckons delete comma
to spring the strongest seeds.
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My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

