grey puddle (haiku)
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You could use the word waving or floating. I'm not sure it is really hard to relate a wing and a puddle
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grey puddle (haiku) - by emerald13 - 10-28-2013, 02:15 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by ChristopherSea - 10-28-2013, 07:13 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by Keaner222 - 11-04-2013, 12:56 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by billy - 11-04-2013, 01:36 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by trailertrash - 12-09-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by beaufort - 12-10-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by John Galt - 03-17-2014, 02:39 AM



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