The wind
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Did you write "can" twice on purpose on line 8? Other than that I very much enjoyed it
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The wind - by Keith - 11-04-2013, 05:18 AM
RE: The wind - by Keaner222 - 11-04-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: The wind - by Keith - 11-05-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: The wind - by Charlesjoseph - 11-05-2013, 08:53 AM
RE: The wind - by Keith - 11-05-2013, 09:25 AM
RE: The wind - by Charlesjoseph - 11-05-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: The wind - by Keith - 11-07-2013, 04:54 AM
RE: The wind - by bena - 11-05-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: The wind - by Nick - 11-05-2013, 01:56 AM
RE: The wind - by ChristopherSea - 11-06-2013, 08:27 AM
RE: The wind - by Graystar - 11-06-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: The wind - by lainey - 11-06-2013, 03:32 PM
RE: The wind - by Charlesjoseph - 11-06-2013, 10:12 PM



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