Alone, yet Surrounded

[MpoemsR]

I speak to my self
knowing that the zombies
are just like everybody else A very powerful intro, however I do suggest that you add more adjectives.

I sit quietly observing
the people surrounding me
not knowing Great stanza!

sickened by evil
who am i to turn to
i hate the deceitful

realizing that i am my own pupil
I found my savior
and in returned showed me to his people

for I was never truly alone
I had God
Goodbye evil

I notice that the poem is about religion, although there is nothing with it, I do suggest that in religious poem that you should more subtle about it.